the packet itself was too thick, but it was interesting. i learned things i didn't know before now. doesn't mean i enjoyed reading it, and, again, it was very interesting, but it was too much reading and the argument lost its power and persuasiveness. i do disagree with some points, but that's just my opinion.
but wow, that was a pain to annotate... please not another one like this...
(i've only annotated about half the packet as of the moment i post this, so if need be, i will write another post)
sorry this is so late. annotations...
Marianne, tell me which parts were interesting and which you disagreed with. I think you probably have very interesting opinions, but you need to expand on them.
ReplyDeleteoh, ok. i shall add that.
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